JOURNEY TO THE CITY OF LOOS


If Bazalgette hadn’t given in to bricks!

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We would come to this place on high days and holidays;

join the ponging throng

headed for the fragrant city on yonder hill,

Shitopolis.

Once through the gates and greeted by an army of flunkies

we would be guided to our own private palace of poo,

all carved marble and cast iron,

that many splendoured place

that stood cheek by jowl, or in our case, cheek by cheek

with our neighbours,

where we would pass the time of day

(and plenty else besides).

All around, men and women would bob up and down to admire their handiwork,

the ladies hidden behind filigree screens which allowed for conversation

(which is what most women do when they are on the loo)

but maintained their modesty,

and the chaps, lined up in Byzantine urinals

would stand in thrall of their neighbours’ priapus in the next door stall

or be regaled by tales of jobbing plumbers

with the squits…

For the hoi polloi, rows of cubicles stretched to the horizon

and at intersections the brush boys,

apprenticed to the lavatory man (who, naturally, had the moniker of Dan)

would be sent round the u-bends

to ensure that all was spic and span.

In the central square, stood an unctuous monument to Thomas the king of crap,

given the clap he by now so richly deserved

in celebration of such glorious sanitation.

The quacks, whose formulations to ease constipation

or devices to fill crevices,

vied for the attention of those in a hurry

to settle their scores with Montezuma

(out for revenge as usual).

And a century on,

when so public and social an evacuation

was no longer favoured by this nation,

the weeds would take hold,

goldfish no longer swim in the copper and glass cisterns on Dump Street

and the Friends of the City of Loos

would charge me a penny, to sit in contemplation, broken-hearted

and dream of gases now departed.

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From her collection Death and Remembrance__

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